Analysis Of comic strip

With a plain background the yellow monsters eyes really stick out but it also hides the characters. I feel the plain black and white background is perfect expect I feel I should add some color to most importantly the characters. The characters are not very distinct, but with the addition of specific bright colors I might be able to achieve a more stand out affect.
One characteristic that does separate the characters are the kind of wacky hair style.
The grey does represent the lights being turned off and the room being dark but if the viewer somehow didn’t pick up on the light switch tey might mistaken the grey diagonal lines as rain.
I did forget to put a window in the second slide but other than that the stage is pretty much the same in each scene which is good. Something somewhat confusing is when I uploaded the slides I couldn’t line them up horizontally and when I tried to line them up vertically they are backwards.